Ayumi Hamasaki Sekai

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yamadashun 8th April 2013 03:24 AM

now i understand why ayu's 15th anni concept is in camouflage with that fierce look on her face: "In order to love you, I chose this battle". and isn't Tell All also an idea from her "TA" abbrev? (maybe a hidden short fort for Thanks All too)

^thanks for the translation! this is really a cool song.

music_* 8th April 2013 06:20 AM

Thank you Larien for the Japanese lyrics! m(_ _)m
I can read and write Japanese, but transcribing has always been a headache. Also, I love how lyrical your translation is; if anything I think you've made it more poetic than the original Japanese lyrics with your choice of words ("wind striking your cheeks", "battle" instead of "fight", "screaming out toward the future"). Mad respect for that. :love

I do think Delirium's translation works better in certain lines though:
Quote:

Originally Posted by Delirium-Zer0 (Post 2991263)
I want you to tell me "I'm happy"
Without any fight on your part.
.
.
If I inspire you to,
Raise your voice

Telling someone to be happy and yet not have any fighting spirit seems contradictory, and the part about hoping to inspire "you" to raise your voice fits better contextually.

Also, just to point out an observation I made: Ayu seems to have made a distinction between 愛せる and 愛する (for the non-Japanese speakers, it means "to be able to love you" and "to love you" respectively). Not that it really makes a difference when translated or otherwise, seeing that the meaning of the line more or less remains the same - but it complicates trying to understand the nuance of Ayu's lyrics. :headache

tokyoxjapanxfan 8th April 2013 06:30 AM

The lyrics are really strong! Thank you both ;)

Can't wait to hear this live o_o.

asagarichan 8th April 2013 06:51 AM

Thank you very much for translation. I love Ayu lyrics.

jkm444 8th April 2013 08:07 AM

thanks for the translation! I find the lyrics very encouraging, it's something I need now, thank you ayu!

Yoake 8th April 2013 08:27 AM

Definitely, this song is perfect. Perfect melodies, perfect arrangement, perfect lyrics.

Thanks for translation to both of you.

C+R+E+AYUMI 8th April 2013 08:43 AM

Quote:

Living in a state of regret,
You will never come to terms with the past
If you cannot let go of the past,
At least smile for me now
is that referred to Maro maybe????

Thank you for sharing

ayu_ready? 8th April 2013 09:47 AM

song is really for my situation right now

Larien 8th April 2013 09:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by music_* (Post 2991304)
Thank you Larien for the Japanese lyrics! m(_ _)m
I can read and write Japanese, but transcribing has always been a headache. Also, I love how lyrical your translation is; if anything I think you've made it more poetic than the original Japanese lyrics with your choice of words ("wind striking your cheeks", "battle" instead of "fight", "screaming out toward the future"). Mad respect for that. :love

I do think Delirium's translation works better in certain lines though:


Telling someone to be happy and yet not have any fighting spirit seems contradictory, and the part about hoping to inspire "you" to raise your voice fits better contextually.

Also, just to point out an observation I made: Ayu seems to have made a distinction between 愛せる and 愛する (for the non-Japanese speakers, it means "to be able to love you" and "to love you" respectively). Not that it really makes a difference when translated or otherwise, seeing that the meaning of the line more or less remains the same - but it complicates trying to understand the nuance of Ayu's lyrics. :headache

Thank you very much! Is it all right if I keep incorporating some of these suggestions and editing the first post? :)

music_* 8th April 2013 11:49 AM

^ I don't see why not! Just be sure to credit Delirium-Zer0 where it's due :)

*hearT_Place* 8th April 2013 01:07 PM

What powerful lyrics! Thank you both for your translations!

Quote:

Originally Posted by yamadashun (Post 2991265)
now i understand why ayu's 15th anni concept is in camouflage with that fierce look on her face: "In order to love you, I chose this battle".

I agree. When I first saw the image, I LOVED it (it reminds me a lot of the theme of the NEVER EVER cover), but I was struck by how different it is from what she has been doing. This definitely helps explain it, and makes me love the image even more!

Corki 8th April 2013 03:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jkm444 (Post 2991338)
I find the lyrics very encouraging, it's something I need now, thank you ayu!

Exactly what I am thinking!

Such a great song! Thanks for the translations! :)

freedreamer 8th April 2013 04:04 PM

Is anyone available to romanization for Tell All ?? haha

*hearT_Place* 8th April 2013 04:09 PM

I also like how similar the last line is to a line in the second verse of "Free & Easy"; the line that goes "the proof that you are alive exists inside of me" or something like that. I love when she makes lyrical connections like that!

inspire_rmx 8th April 2013 04:25 PM

thanks so much for the translation ^^ love the lyrcis

Surreal17 8th April 2013 04:36 PM

These lyrics are very powerful and it's obvious that it's dedicated to her dear fans.Thank you both for your effort!!

xLuna&1LOVE 8th April 2013 07:42 PM

I like the lyrics. It's what jkm444 says: they are so encouraging! Totally agreed.
Thank you so much Ayu,for this beautiful song.

Andrenekoi 8th April 2013 08:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by C+R+E+AYUMI (Post 2991351)
is that referred to Maro maybe????

Thank you for sharing

The "forgiving the past" thing appears over and over and over again on her lyrics... I wouldn't be surprised if at least 1 song on every album has it.

Tomoyo 8th April 2013 09:08 PM

didn't see Romaji, so here it is!!!

Kimi ga kakaete iru yami no fuka-sada toka
Kimi no hoho ni ataru kaze no tsuyo-sada toka
Kimi dake ni shika wakaranai koto wa
Kitto takusan arukedo

Shuujou shiteru mama ja
Nani mo hajimaranai
Nani mo hajimaranakya
Ushinau itami mo wakaranai

Mirai wo sakenderu
Akirameru toki ja nai tte
Kimi wo aiseru tame
Boku wa kono tatakai wo eranda


Kimi ga odayakana asa wo mukae tari
Kimi ga kowagarazu ni yoru wo sugose tari
Kimi ni wa nani no kioi mo naku
Shiawaseda yo to itte hoshii

Koukai shiteru dake ja
Kako wa yurusarenai
Kako wo yurusenai nara
Ima sae hohoende wa kurenai

Mirai wo sakenderu
Ima koso ga susumu toki datte
Kimi wo aisuru tame
Boku wa kono tatakai wo eranda


Koushite kaku agetara
Ookiku koe agete
Soshitara kao wo agete furikaerazu ni hashiri dasu
Nani mo kowa kunai yo

Shuujou shiteru mama ja
Nani mo hajimaranai
Nani mo hajimaranakya
Ushinau itami mo wakaranai

Mirai wo sakenderu
Akirameru toki ja nai tte
Kimi wo aiseru tame
Boku wa kono tatakai wo eranda

Koukai shiteru dake ja
Kako wa yurusarenai
Kako wo yurusenai nara
Ima sae hohoende wa kurenai

Mirai wo sakenderu
Ima koso ga susumu toki datte
Kimi wo aisuru tame
Boku wa kono tatakai wo eranda


Boku ga kimi no ikiru akashi ni natte miseru yo

adantatu2 9th April 2013 12:19 AM

^thanks
and thanks for the translation


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