exitement -> excitement
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"glitter" is often used with minus image
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Huh?
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I remember strangely clearly
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Hm.. that sounds iffy.. You should put it "Strangely I remember clearly" or "I strangely remember clearly".... I remember strangely clearly sounds slightly.. akward.
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To that place we are dreaming
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I think this should be "To that place we are dreaming of"
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Wherever we may go in future
Please just make much of the present
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I think it sounds better if you say "Please just make the most of the present" ... also I think "in future" sounds more normal as "in the future" but I think "in future" isn't gramatically incorrect either
Other than that, awesome! Thanks