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Originally Posted by masa
To ImpactBreaker
Thanks. I corrected the part.
By the way, I'm thinking of adding "yet" to the 9th line.
YET another step back afterwards
Is it no problem?
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I'm sure that's fine. It would make it flow a little more smoothly, unless you would like to put a comma after the 8th line.
It seems to be like a "part of Me PART II". However, I like these lyrics a lot more to be honest.