12th December 2009, 08:06 PM
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winding road Initiate
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Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: US of A, New England is love~
Posts: 7,468
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Miltonic
Thanks and beautiful lyrics but this part "Maybe, I can no more hold on" doesn't make sense, I suggest to change it to "Maybe, I can't hold on anymore" which would be the right way of putting it.
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or "I can no longer hold on"?
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