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Old 29th March 2010, 09:10 PM
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to go a bit away from appears and oji-san's translation questions...

may you turn your eyes on this part, it's just minor, but like a thorn in my eye:

Quote:
Though it's true that there were the days
When I felt my limits
Turned my back on everything and crouched down
the 'the' i bolded... there's no need for it.
so it should look like this:
Quote:
Though it's true that there were days
When I felt my limits
Turned my back on everything and crouched down
thank you~ ^^
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