^ yes i know, but the language we are translating into should still flow well and not sound completely unnatural, no? anyway, japanese is your first language so you are good at conveying the original meaning as well as nuances that non-native speakers might not pick up, so your input is invaluable
and i am a native english speaker so i can do my best to attempt a good english translation

glad you are somewhat(!) happy with the shikai translation anyway