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yep.
Sorry for generalization, but there are several ways to translate just one sentence (and to add an explanation), I believe.
But I'm not sure whether masa-san would like other ideas or not.
Like I'm not sure whether masa-san has seen my comments to his translations of Lady Dynamite and 1 Love.
(ah, my comment to 1 Love is also a comment to your question, truehappiness. Have you seen it?)
Anyway, I'm happy if there's a good place to talk about interpretations and translations of ayu's lyrics.
