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Unfortunately, we haven't heard other members' opinions.
Well, I don't want to change the part to "before I get tired" as you say. Because "nemuku naru" is "get sleepy". I think using the word "sleepy" is desirable in this case. And the translation of "get tired" would be "tsukareru", "akiru" or "unzari suru". But I've come to think that changing this part to "before it puts me to sleep" (Peachilicious's suggestion) might be good.
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