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Tom Punks · #85 27th November 2011, 10:14 PM

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Originally Posted by ハート〜ブレーカ♥

I just want them to get what they deserve because in my opinion, they're 10 times better than SNSD or TVXQ.

I wrote romanized lyrics to the song (the short version because I'm lazy) and they're better than the ones already posted. The person who wrote those doesn't know any Japanese, and I think for the most part, mine is much better.

No offense, but from your lyrics, I can tell you don't speak much Japanese either.

I got rid of the unnecessary commas and corrected the parts that were kind of gibberish, but there is one part in the chorus where I just can't understand what Hoon is saying. Other than that, they should be pretty accurate. The corrections are in red:

Spoiler:

By the way, を is used for the "o" particle, not お. I went ahead and changed all the "o"s in the romanization to "wo"s for you. You probably already know this, but it's not necessary to romanize を as "wo", and it's perfectly fine to romanize it as "o" if you prefer. But if you're trying to learn the difference between where to use を vs. お, you should probably go ahead and get used to figuring out the difference when romanized, as well. It would probably help. ^^ I also corrected 其の to その because no one ever uses the former.

You should go ahead and try writing the rest of the lyrics in kanji; it would be a good little bit of practice.