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ハート〜ブレーカ♥ · #88 28th November 2011, 02:01 PM

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Originally Posted by Tom Punks

No offense, but from your lyrics, I can tell you don't speak much Japanese either.

I got rid of the unnecessary commas and corrected the parts that were kind of gibberish, but there is one part in the chorus where I just can't understand what Hoon is saying. Other than that, they should be pretty accurate. The corrections are in red:

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By the way, を is used for the "o" particle, not お. I went ahead and changed all the "o"s in the romanization to "wo"s for you. You probably already know this, but it's not necessary to romanize を as "wo", and it's perfectly fine to romanize it as "o" if you prefer. But if you're trying to learn the difference between where to use を vs. お, you should probably go ahead and get used to figuring out the difference when romanized, as well. It would probably help. ^^ I also corrected 其の to その because no one ever uses the former.

You should go ahead and try writing the rest of the lyrics in kanji; it would be a good little bit of practice.

I never said I spoke alot of Japanese, I just said I knew more than the person who only wrote nonsense. I'm in a Japanese class, so.. None of theirs was right. Thank you for making the corrections~ I looked up alot of words to see if they were something other than just what I heard, but I didn't look up every single one. I'll try harder~