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Hello.
Today I read all your translations of this new album (I was not home for about a week) and impressed that you are understanding her lyrics in Japanese almost perfectly. So I decided that I don't translate her lyrics myself this time but tell you of several parts which I think would be changed better. So first, this song.
What’s more important
Than living the present to the fullest?
Why don't you use "enjoying" instead of "living"?
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