
20th August 2018, 05:31 AM
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(don't) Leave me alone Initiate
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Join Date: May 2008
Location: CA
Posts: 13,339
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Zeke.
I love that line too, but the translation doesn’t do the original justice. I translate the phrase as such, taking effort to preserve the poetic beauty of the original Japanese lyrics:
It is because the lovers are walking hand in hand (eh), seemingly ever so happily, that it appears everything is going well, (right?). But the truth is, save for the two of them, nobody knows.
I find it especially important to include the word “appears” as it connects more directly to the title of the track, and further imbeds the connotation of it being a “facade”. And actually, I never understood why it was called “appears” until I interpreted that line in that way. Originally I thought the title referred to something showing up, becoming visible - when in realty, it speaks on appearances, the way things look to the eye (but potentially are a lie).
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Wow, thank you for that! Your translation made me appreciate it even more.
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