EDIT: AH, Disaro, you beat me to it! Yours looks good. No need to bother with mine now. ^^ (I was so slow romanizing this. ^^;; )
Hhehe, you don't need to take it off. You tried and it was good, the only problem was kanji right? I know it's not easy to know the reading by heart but you rox dude!
Thank you for the translation... I was trying to translate it too, but it's not easy...lol