Well, you do know that masa has a site dedicated to many Ayu translations and currently resides in Japan as well as posts at a huge Ayu BBS, right?
http://homepage2.nifty.com/morimasa/e-ayu.html <--his site~ it's even at the top of AHS' page! Under the banner thing..
I'm not sure if a translation can be more accurate than another .. maybe just done differently :/