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are You wake Up? i think ti kinda fits if ya think about it...i mean, if you are asking if soemone's awake, that person could still be sleeping, so the fact that the grammar's wrong, makes sense since the title seems kinda sleepish. The song wakes you up definently, but i think that it's focused on that, not whether the title's grammar's correct. And plus, the song after it, it's fairyland, this land shouldn't be a place that you care about grammar. That's why i think the name's okay. Besides, Ayu wouldnt' make that mistake accidently, cause it's so easibly noticable that it's wrong. Someone on her lil crew prolly know english to make sure she doesn't make the mistake of grammar usage.
I dont' have any problems with the names. To change About You to "you are..." doesnt' seem right to me. I think "you are" sounds balladish. About You sounds good to me. now that i think about it, i think humming 7/4 is a bad name. I dunno if you noticed but the reason i's called that is because the 7/4 means the 4/4 time the song's in. The reason why i hate the title is because the whole songs not in that time signature. It's only at a certain part that it is, the beginning, that's it. I think the song should be called "Humming!" and that's it.
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Winter Whispers
For all the words unspoken
I keep to myself because I’m selfish
I don’t speak to you because I think you’re selfish
Can’t there be an easier way?
My mind trespasses a vacant heart
But it soon learns of the orphan of secrets
Held inside
Why can’t I just foster my emotions
Like you had
Like all of you had?
In the stormy season
We often admire the rain
Why is it so admirable?
What’s so blissful about crying skies?
Nothing’s blissful about running mascaras
And gasping orbs of emotion
Smeared liner of depression
Drenched cheeks with forged smiles
The colder it is
The warmer we truly feel, right?
So can’t you just accept the secrets
And put away the selfish mindset
Because I can’t do the same thing.
-Yume (ME!! i wrote it!! lalala...)
Last edited by YumeHamasaki; 3rd October 2006 at 09:00 PM.
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