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Old 12th May 2016, 08:39 PM
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Originally Posted by Aga-chan View Post
I don't really like how those lines feel disconnected. Specially the first one.


Maybe change it to something like this?

冷たい目で should be "with cold eyes".

Thanks for the translation. ^^
Yeah, I agree with these points. They are better.

I think I need to start putting together my own lyrical booklet with these changes.
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