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Old 13th December 2009, 01:22 AM
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thanks masa!

one thing:

'Onegai soba ni ite'

you've translated as:

"I beg you, please stay by me"

but this looks like you've translated 'onegai' twice. also, and more importantly, this line is already translated in the PV!! It's on the note, and is translated as:

"Please stay with me"

so I think you should just use this 'official' line too.

again, thanks very much!
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