Not into this kind of musical style, this kind of remix-y kind of music (I don't know this genre, is it EDM, is it trance?! I'm sorry, I really don't know >_<) but I like the lyrics. I love her vocals, they sound desperate and considering the lyrics I think they fit really well.
I always enjoy when singers sound desperate, close to tears, I think it makes the songs seem a lot more emotional and honest (as weird as it sounds). I can't judge the composition at all, I don't listen to this kind of music at all. It's okay for me, but I'm skipping the beginning part most of the time because I only want to hear her voice.
I do like the song as a whole although I skip parts of it. I think it would be interesting to hear a different mix with it. Maybe a longer version of this one or an acoustic guitar one, (or anything else) I think that would be interesting