'BLUE BIRD' romaji and translation

[Dustie]

The sun is too bright" is too literal I think and does not really take into account the emotion she was trying to get across in that sentance.

That makes my point. Why should we change it, if it was infact "the sun is too bright"? We don't know, after all, what emotion she wanted to get across... I think it's better to know what she wrote even if it sounds simple, rathen than an 'enhanced' version...

(I don't know if she wrote "the sun is too bright" obviously, as I can see there's a discussion about it going on, I just used it to explain)

As I wrote in my previous post, I was just confused about what she wrote, becouse some expressions sounded different, less or more powerful. I know there might be places we can't tell which word fits better - if so, I just wanted to know that...