[romaji and translation] Days

[jon_the_d]

masa...!??!?!

so, you mean stanzas 4, 5 and 6 all flow together... I know that, but what is your "though" comparing?

4 and 5 would use "though" if the meaning was that "even though I've known for a long time, I still have painful nights..etc."

If this is the meaning then a "though" would make sense.

but, we thought the "though" that you used could also link 5 to 6, as in: "...I have painful nights, though thinking of you can give my heart the meaning to live...etc."

Which of these two is the way you expect your use of "though" to be interpreted?

or is it another way entirely?