[romaji and translation] Sunrise ～LOVE is ALL～

[truehappiness]

How is it translated badly?

Motto ooki na koe de
Motto ooki na ai wo

Translates to that..

[ren0210989]

maybe it'd be better to translate it as "greater" in stead of "bigger"
greater can be used in both "bigger" and "more awesome" way

bigger love just sounds kinda off here...

but never the less, it's an awesome translation masa
thank you a lot for it

[Maemi]

thanks masa

[zyoeru]

Thank you masa! But shouldn't the line:

Shoujiki uso ni naru kedo ne

Be...shoujiki uso ni naru keredo ne. I definitely hear keredo instead of kedo.

And I have to agree...the chorus part isn't natural sounding in English.

[stef_gal]

thanks

[mcluva420]

sank yuu!!! <333

[yamadashun]

thanks alot masa-san!!!

i LOVE this lyric~~~

[waterballoon]

The chorus or whatever just needs an "a", "an" or "the"... nothing too serious going on here!

[kirei_ayumi]

beautiful lyrics!
thanks for sharing

[LacusClyne]

masa, you change this 2nd line to the 3rd line right?

'Come closer to me
I want you to listen carefully in your heart
And try to trust me more'

but anyway thanks for your translation. (^_^)

[vampireknightzero]

Thanks for the translation! a very positive lyrics!

[ImpactBreaker]

These lyrics make me smile

Thanks masa!

[BluishDays]

Thanks so much masa for the translation

[hanabiwings]

いつも有難う御座居ます！

MASAさんの英訳を読みますと、なるほどと納得出来ます。
私も翻訳を挑んでいますけれども、まだ語学力が足りないので、
とても勉強に成りました。

サンキューｘ２！！

あゆの歌詞、心強くて可愛いらしいものがあります。
前向きに生きてみようという気持ちに成れます。

[rookies]

Thanks masa! ^^

[C+R+E+AYUMI]

I love the lyrics..thanks masa again

[agashi]

wow! thank you for d translations!! XD

[Peruseusu]

thy! ^^

[masa]

You are welcome.

To: Furashubakku
As you say, the part was not "kedo" but "keredo". My simple mistake. I correct it.

And as for the chorus part, I'd like to hear your opinions.
Bigger love
A bigger love
The bigger love
Greater love
A greater love
The greater love
Which do you think is the most suitable?

[TITANIC]

thank you masa