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Old 24th November 2016, 02:11 AM
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Talking' 2 Myself tattoo help

Hi all,
I want to get this line as a tattoo but I want to make sure it's all proper Japanese before I do. Any help would be appreciated
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Old 24th November 2016, 04:40 AM
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Well, the "to iu koto" at the end doesn't really make much sense without "kimi wa shitteru". It's like saying "the fact that creation is born from destruction." without a "You understand..." at the beginning of it.

You'd want to separate the two characters at the start of the second line, and you'd want to move the second line to the left of the first line rather than the right.

Here's an image:
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Thank you, Delirium-Zer0! That's extremely helpful. And it makes more sense now, I was concerned about that.
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