[jon_the_d]

maikaru...

thanks for explaining further...

maybe a little tweak to your suggested version might be acceptable:

your suggestion:
"The painful, painful
and when my chest is tight nights
Are certainly there, but..."

tweaked:

"painful, painful
nights, when my chest feels so tight,
are certainly there, but..."

again, I took some liberties to make the english not sound so awkward whilst keeping the order of information in tact (as much as possible)

I'm quite happy with it...any thoughts?