Quote:
Originally posted by ayumi1121
ashitano imagoroniwa umaku waraeru
soumarude nanigotomo nakatta ka no youni
itsu datte soriatte aruiteikita fuuni
koukei no omosugi ni sousa dekinai
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I think it should be "konna GEEMU" instead of "koukei no",
just like
yamogi pointed it out.
I also think that it should be "ashita no ni", "nani koto mo" and "omou you ni" -
though I am not 100% sure.
Great job, btw!