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To: Delirium-Zer0 and jon the d Thanks for your suggestions. I change several parts as below, taking them. Is so precious treasure to me --> Is such a precious treasure to me So you would surely laugh at me, if you knew it --> So if you knew, you would surely laugh at me you have precious one --> you have someone precious your smiling face is telling of it --> it's clear from your smile Feeling so sad --> Feeling so sad, so sad (I think "painful" is too strong in nuance as the word for "setsunai".) If only I think of you --> If I just think of you Please let me stay loving you --> Please let me keep on loving you And I have a question. Some people are suggesting "one and only one wish" instead of "one and onle wish". But actually, I've never seen such a way of writing. Is it common among English speaking people now? Last edited by masa; 6th December 2008 at 03:48 PM. |
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