[romaji and translation] Days

[Melrose]

order of information" is very important to me, for example, the last word of a verse, may be sung with real passion and emotion,

Thanks for your help maikaru. ^^ I understand what was wrong with my other version.

Like, she says "chest tightens at night" but I turned it into "chest tightens, it is true at night like that". I see. ^^

Ah well~ I'll leave jon_the_d for chopping it up better so that the repeated word matches. He's from the UK and I'm not even English as first language haha. =p