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8th December 2008, 10:00 AM
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masa, so where are you going to put your "though"?
if you think it modifies/links 4 to 5 and 5 to 6, how are you going to do that in english....? maybe use two "though"s? just using one "though" does not link 4 to 5 AND 5 to 6... - also what makes you think she is calm/not calm in these stanzas? certainly not the way she sings them... They're both negative, so how does 'though' work? it doesn't work in english...
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