[romaji and translation] Sunrise ～LOVE is ALL～

[waterballoon]

@masa: I personally like "A bigger love" the most.

[Calico]

I think anything with "great" involved would sound more natural. =) Big kinda has a plain connotation, whereas great sounds more positive.

Anyway, thanks for the translation! I really love these lyrics, probably the best part of the whole single thus far.

[zyoeru]

A greater voice,
A greater love.

^ That sounds the nicest, I think it also fits more with the message of the song. It's not just a big love it's a greaaater love.

Thank you again masa~!

[y_nathz]

thx a lot masa ! ^^
love the lyrics ~

[waterballoon]

Actually now that I think about it, "A greater love" would be a little more "poetic" I guess~ But whatever, this song makes me smile!

[syntherella]

Ni hao, masa-san! Thanks again for your hard work; I enjoyed reading your translation since I couldn't understand quite a bit of the lyrics on my own and your perspective is always appreciated. If it's all right with you, I have some suggestions:

Originally Posted by masa

* I want to send bigger love to you
In a louder voice
I want to get to your heart

I want to send a greater love to you
In a louder voice
I want to reach your heart

I agree with ren0210989 that 'greater' is more suited to describe 'love' than 'bigger' is. 'Bigger' is usually used to describe tangible objects, things which can be seen and touched. Also, as Calico said, it sounds more natural and positive.

Originally Posted by masa

** If I shout bigger love
In a louder voice
I wonder if it will reach you just a little

If I shout out a greater love for you
In a louder voice
I wonder if it will reach you just a little

Originally Posted by masa

*** It's even better to take a roundabout way
I know we'll be able to understand each other

It's okay even if we take a roundabout way
I know we'll still be able to understand each other

Originally Posted by masa

(In a louder voice)
(Bigger love)

(In a louder voice)
(With a greater love)

Originally Posted by masa

I just have a mind to face you
But actually I'm running away, don't you think so?

I had wanted to meet you face-to-face
Yet ended up running away, don't you think so?

Originally Posted by masa

But I'm all prepared
All taken together

But since I'm fully prepared
All things considered

Originally Posted by masa

Come closer to me
I want you to listen carefully in your heart
And try to trust me more

Come closer to me
And try to trust me more, that's all I ask
Listen carefully with your heart

Originally Posted by masa

The time of confirming each other's mind is over now
I know we are thinking of each other

There's no more need to confirm our feelings
Now is the time to think of each other

Originally Posted by masa

But I think it's OK
Because I love such a point

But I think it's okay
Because that's what I love about us

[zyoeru]

^ That would be perfect imo.

[masa]

To: syntherella
Thanks for your suggestions. I'll take many of them.
Bigger love --> A greater love
get to --> reach
If I shout bigger love --> If I shout out a greater love for you
I want you to listen carefully in your heart --> And try to trust me more, that's all I ask
And try to trust me more --> Listen carefully with your heart
The time of confirming each other's mind is over now --> There's no more need to confirm our feelings

But as for the other parts, I think the meanings of your translations are a little different from those of the original lyrics. So I don't change them.

To: Hanabiwings
頑張ってね

[jbrat2219]

Thanks for the translation!

[syntherella]

Originally Posted by masa

To: syntherella
Thanks for your suggestions. I'll take many of them.

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But as for the other parts, I think the meanings of your translations are a little different from those of the original lyrics. So I don't change them.

I'm happy to help! My Japanese is poor so even if I understand the meaning of each individual word I often misread the context. That's why I usually wait for your translation to clarify my doubts. 今度もありがとう！

[truehappiness]

Thank you so much masa. I greatly appreciate everything you do for us at AHS, expecting nothing in return.. so admirable.

[Emperatriz Ayumi]

Thanks for the translation!!!

[masa]

You are welcome.
My PC is in bad condition. I have to have it repaired. I'll not be able to come here until next week.

[truehappiness]

Okay. We should be able to wait until then.. the single does come out then, anyway!

Thanks again, masa.

[asmAyumi1992]

Thanks you!! I've search the lyric but I got nothing! Thanks very much!!!

[ren0210989]

i like the adaptations that you made^^
it sounds better now^^
thank you again for being so caring and giving masa

[bluecyclone]

thanks for the trans

[Yoake]

thanks a lot ^^
there are so nice

[Minttulatte]

I like the lyrics of this song. So pretty and so different than her songs usually are imo. Sunrise is a good song, indeed.

[extepan]

thanks!