[romaji & translation] Lady Dynamite

[truehappiness]

And you restart your glib and flat speech
In a loud voice

This feels a bit strange to me... since this song is very "fierce" and this phrase doesn't have the attitude that I feel from it.

Maybe it could be like this:

And you keep chattering on
In a loud voice

http://japanese.about.com/blqow16.htm

Just a suggestion.

[masa]

Originally Posted by truehappiness

This feels a bit strange to me... since this song is very "fierce" and this phrase doesn't have the attitude that I feel from it.

It's not necessary that every line is "fierce", is it? And I think that "glib" and "flat" are ironical words enough.