Please do me a huge favor!

[isaac hiew]

The song is good, but no offence, your brother still needs a little bit more practise on his voice. There are many fields waiting for your brother's band to improvise. In my opinion, if your brother's voice can be a little bit low (if better a bit coarse) and the tune of the song can be a little bit more metallic, then it will be good.

And lastly, if the lyrics can bring out a story e.g Avril Lavigne's I'm with you, Nickelback's Someday then it will be a great song. It seems that your brother is going after Green Day and Blink 182 style .......