'criminal' romaji and translation

[DDR ninja]

Thank you masa!!!

WOOHOO! <3 I can't wait till you do Ladies Night and Beautiful Day! ^___^

[Qt Mashi]

thanks for the translation!

[kournikova]

thx a lot ^^

[masa]

You are welcome.

>I am pretty sure that "superfine" is not a word, and it sounds awkward.

Really? Though this word is in my dictionary.
So I change it to "superb". (I editted my first post.)

[masa]

Again, I changed the ninth line as this and editted my first post.
You wished to be so strong --> You wished to be strong so much

[kyomiayu]

Thanks for the translation!

[lotusoka]

Thanks masa! I like the lyrics... but I'd like them more if I understood the context.

[Sylphiel]

Superb is much better.

[Baernash]

This is another song I could say lyrics r my fave - I like the song in all because it sounds awesome, however lyrics r always very important for me.

[nmskalmn]

Originally Posted by masa

You are welcome.

>I am pretty sure that "superfine" is not a word, and it sounds awkward.

Really? Though this word is in my dictionary.
So I change it to "superb". (I editted my first post.)

superfine is a word, and would probably be fine to use here. I think it has a bit of a sarcastic connotation when used about people though.

[Neo Daydream]

thank you so much! the award you received was/is VERY well deserved! ^^

[masa]

I changed the first line and editted my first post.

As your silence remains longer --> As your silence continues longer

[AyuRlz]

the title does not really fit into the picture... but thanks masa~

[skydiver4lyfe]

thankz vry vry vry muchie!~

[Iraka]

Wow. Thanks. The meaning's so deep...and so sad... Makes me just wanna cuddle and comfort Ayu-chan...

Still, with that last stanza, she still hasn't lost hope, has she? Despite the sorrowful tone of the song, she still remains optimistic about the future.

[HanabiChick]

Thanks so much for the translation, it's such a sad song.

[sexysaucestar]

Thank you very much for the translation. The song makes me want to cry. =(