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I'm so happy to see that highly regarded Journalists and Publications still have their finger on the pulse of the Japanese Music Industry and are able to pick out the gems and acknowledge history being made, causing all else to be irrelevant.
Of course the news of Utada being given such a prestigious title of honor by such a prestigious people is going to cause uproar and Utada bashing on an Ayumi forum. That doesn't take away from this moment though so just smile and nod and be happy and enjoy it. Nothing has changed since the first opening post. Utada is still "The Most Influential Artist of The Decade" and I just can't contain myself. :p
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Here's one line of poetry from "Colors": "On the black and white of the chessboard, we met by chance" Failure of logic. Misuse of metaphor. Hikki is comparing life as we know it to a chessboard, but then she introduces the idea of meeting by chance. Chess is not a game of chance but of strategic, conscious, and deliberate movements towards a foreseen goal. It is a game of the fate of its pieces as determined by its players. Someone may argue that Hikki is trying to subvert the prevailing idea that our lives are determined by fate, that we can move beyond the black and white demarcations of a chessboard but 1) there are no other lyrics in the song that say this was her intent, the line before actually reinforces that she just chose the metaphor "just because it's cute", and 2) the construction of this sentence (in English and Japanese) betrays her lack of skillful use of words. The only reason she uses the image of a chessboard is because she wants to use "black and white" to conform to the title of the song and because the metaphor "life is a chessboard" (blatant cliche, it has been used so many times in literature) sounds pretty. Last edited by Uemarasan; 21st December 2009 at 10:53 AM. |
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But still... IMO the biggest point on Ayu's lyrics is that it's very easy to relate to them, what IMO and ON THE WAY I SEE BOTH AYU'S AND HIKKI'S WORK doesn't mean that one is a better songwritter than the other, just that they have different focus, and good enough for them, both archieve sucess |
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^See above. I edited my post.
I'm not saying that Hikki is a bad lyricist, but using the term "poetry" to describe her lyrics is misguided. They seem poetic, but are ,in fact, not when you read them closely. I'd rather say that Hikki's lyrics are more "playful" as opposed to Ayu's more "introspective" lyrics. Last edited by Uemarasan; 21st December 2009 at 11:01 AM. |
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@uemarasan: I really don't pick up this heighted awareness and intelligence you find in Ayu's lyrics...would you mind explaining a little more?
Because, while I do feel that Ayu's lyrics are deep, and show profound emotion, I always saw them more as from the heart, and more...simply her trying to put down her feelings, and putting it together in the form of verses. I don't really see any hints of poetry in her lyrics...except that it's her feelings put down on paper...which any emo can do (no disrespect meant by that)....is this something that is lost in translation? Are there hints of Japanese styled poetry in her works? tbh, I never really looked at hikki's lyrics, except for passion...so..meh about that lol her music was always more important for me...as with ayu...her lyrics were quite big for me back in the day...so it's interesting.
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Uh, you just said it yourself: "I do feel that Ayu's lyrics are deep, and show profound emotion." Why should there be a clear distinction between what comes from the heart and what comes from the brain? It takes a heightened awareness and intelligence to express deep and profound emotion in writing that, in the first place, makes sense (which most emo music fails to achieve). I think you're referring to cerebralism, and Ayu is not a cerebral lyricist. If you really want me to argue for the sake of Ayu's intelligence, this might take a while:
From "Marionette": First of all, the song is about the consideration of our life experience: Memories are always beautiful In the eyes of everyone In the same way ... We can look back on the past Because we passed there We stopped and stepped forward again Our tendency is to make sense of our life experience, to rearrange it in a way that is pleasing to us. We always transform our lives into some form of beautiful story (memory), and so Ayu compares this to staging a marionette play. The past has been romanticized and elevated (Memories are beautiful...), life has been transformed into a drama that we stage for our own reasons. But: But, yes We actually know That there is more ... We were not born to live Just putting on a front And hiding a face Like the dead She argues against trivializing life as such. We have unwittingly turned ourselves into the marionettes of our own play, our true selves sublimated into the facade of beautiful memories, beautiful stories. In a sense, it is a kind of death. A denial of life. She skillfully introduces a metaphor here: the idea of a death mask is equated with the face of a marionette, which is, in a sense, a mask in itself. Now, let's stand up without fear For the sake of no one else And rip off the masks With our own hands A death mask is used as a presentable face and in fact serves to disguise the dead face beneath it. When we stage our lives carefully like a marionette play, we are depriving it of the messiness, even the ugliness, that life should possess. Life becomes carefully determined, and we manipulate ourselves like marionettes, animated by something resembling a life force but is really not. So she says: stand up without fear, deface our marionette selves, rip off the masks we make for ourselves, that render us dead, and present our true living faces for all to see. That, I believe, is as close as it gets to poetry. Last edited by Uemarasan; 21st December 2009 at 12:14 PM. |
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about the Colors line: u read it on the most straightfoward way... What if she was using the chessboard image to say that against all possibilities they just met by chance (as u said, chess isn't a game where u get things by chance)? I'm not saying that ur reading is wrong and mine is right (we don't have Utada's number in the end of the day, so we can't ask her in person ), but.. there are more than one way to read everything...As I said before: IMO Utada lyrics are close to poetry, and far closer than Ayu's, u can desagree with me, we obviously expect different things from our poetry and depending on the way u read the same text, u can or can't find the same quality others didn't... Does that mean that Ayu is a bad songwritter? Not at all... Cuz I can relate to some of her lyrics on a level I can't with Hikki's... Last edited by Andrenekoi; 21st December 2009 at 01:29 PM. |
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It's absolutely true though. Koda Kumi CAN sing, but what made her tremendously popular was good marketing. That's a fact, it's not up to discussion: what made her huge was Avex huge marketing blitz, not her talent.
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^Yes, poetry is about the words, but the words have to make sense on a fundamental level before they are considered on a metaphorical plane. That is why I gave the most straightforward reading of that line in Colors. If something doesn't work on the basic level of sense, then I don't see any point in trying to locate some sort of profound meaning from them on some vague, mysterious, abstract level.
You said: "What if she was using the chessboard image to say that against all possibilities they just met by chance (as u said, chess isn't a game where u get things by chance)?" That's exactly what I said in my above post: "Someone may argue that Hikki is trying to subvert the prevailing idea that our lives are determined by fate, that we can move beyond the black and white demarcations of a chessboard". And then I argued that nothing else in her song says that she is trying to do that. There is no evidence that she is thinking that way. I disagree on the idea of multiple readings on a fundamental, basic, and grammatical level. It can be allowed when we're arguing metaphors, but we're talking about the most straightforward reading of a line, and the line is illogical. Also, when reading poetry, I couldn't care less about the author's intentions. As far as I'm concerned, the only thing that matters is the text before me. The text is only enriched further when considering intention, biography, etc; the true and core value of the work lies in itself alone. I can read Japanese, and there are barely any nuances lost in translation when it comes to her lyrics (as Sunshine Slayer suggests). She composes at face value most of the time. Show me a great Hikki neologism. I like her musical compositions. I am very fond her music until Ultra Blue and excepting her American work, but her lyrics remain mediocre. You said: "As far as I know, poetry is not about what is being said, it's about how is it down on paper... it's the aesthetic use of the words..." You can use that to describe effective advertising slogans. And that's why it's so easy to write faux poetry. Poetry is more than the aesthetic use of words. It is a heightened process of communication of meaning via literary tropes. "Summer rain that began to fall passed by beside the tears, quietly The images overlapped with memories A rerun of the autumn drama" "Rain of summer has fallen Passing through my tears in silence Images weaving in my mind Dramas of autumn have repeated" Rain! Tears! Autumn! One after the other. Ew. Trite images, trite sentiment. She's basically saying "I am sad and crying. AGAIN." And it took her four damn lines to say the damn thing, using pretty words without a hint of nuance or subtext or even enriched meaning within the context of the rest of the song. This is not poetry. Last edited by Uemarasan; 21st December 2009 at 03:11 PM. |
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Really, I don't get why everyone is so touchy feely about Koda Kumi. You guys seem much more biased than whoever wrote the article. Let's think for a minute: what made Koda Kumi go from an unknown Avex artist to one of the biggest artists in Japan? Was it her talent? No, she has a very good voice and that was probably the reason she was signed but it didn't help her at all. Was her dancing skills? No, it wasn't either. Her songwriting ability? Nope.
The ero-kakoii style? Yes. The humongous promotional campaign for her BEST ~First Things~? Yes. The "controversial" album cover? Yes. Her "controversial" statements? Yes (let me remind you she was the highest-rated performance in Kouhaku 2006 after saying her outfit was so tight she couldn't even wear underwear undernath it). Her 12 week releases? Yes. So the person who wrote the article is completely right in saying what made her tremendously popular was PROMOTION, not actual talent (and yes, she is a very good vocalist and has a nice voice but this was meaningless until Avex started pushing her hardcore based on her risky image). Quote:
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Influence is not equal to talent, anyway. Or greatness.
So, yeah, Hikki is probably the most influential J-pop artist of the decade. I do think that Ayu's influence is still felt in one aspect of Japanese fashion to this day: double eyelid surgery to make eyes wider. The current standard of Asian beauty. Last edited by Uemarasan; 21st December 2009 at 02:37 PM. |
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Exactly. The most "talented" Japanese artist (who can play instruments, sing extremely well, etc) is probably not even a part of the mainstream Jpop scene. And anyway, to debate who is more talented is kind of dumb since it's a subjective thing anyway.
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hikki could write children's books for a living maybe? like that bear song?
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So, from "the other artists bashing thread to make hikki look good" it turned into "the hikki bashing thread"?
And Uemarasan... I'm sorry, but u said nothing that can be taken as a fact, just as the way u like ur poetry... |
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^ I don't see any Hikki bashing, just people saying it like it is, whether it be complete truth or their opinions--which are NOT wrong (that this article is biased, that Hikaru's lyrics will more often than not be seen as inferior to certain others' with more "deep" or "emotional" lyrics, that Hikaru is only one of the most influential and not THE most influential), and then a bunch of Hikki-stans raging over the criticisms of their Queen. :\
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:the act or power of producing an effect without apparent force or direct exercise of command And, since you may not know, here is the definition of "motive:" something (as a need or desire) that causes a person to act Now, let's use them in a few sentences, shall we? ![]() Hikaru Utada has never really influenced me in any of my decisions regarded my singing career. I feel other people have been much more influential, at least to me personally, because they (specifically Ayumi and Kumi) have inspired and motivated me to pursue my dreams. Learn something new everyday, huh, Andre? (Which reminds me, you are suspiciously similar to the other Andre, lol...) Last edited by Crystal_Ageha; 21st December 2009 at 11:17 PM. |
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After reading countless posts, I agree with you on this strongly. We all have a different definition of poetry, some might be trash to us, while others might be grand.
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