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Old 11th May 2007, 06:48 PM
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[Fun] MY STORY ~fans' ver.~

Hrm...bad title, but oh well.

Anyway, I had an idea that has probably come up before, but I couldn't find anything about it so here it is. I think it could be a lot of fun! ^^

Can you make a story out of Ayumi's song titles? Try your best and be creative, but try to use as many as possible and see how well you can make the "plot" flow.

If you have to repeat titles, that's ok, but try not to do it too often.


I will submit my own story shortly as I'm a bit crunched for time today, but I will have it posted over the next few days.

And just for clarification reasons, use original titles - no remixes. I also meant to indicate to use ALL song titles, not just the ones from MY STORY. Makes it a bit more challenging ;-) Sorry for the misleading title...
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Old 11th May 2007, 06:51 PM
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YES YES!!!! PICK ME! PICK ME!!!!

I can do that!!!!! I will also add MY STORY later...

and AyumiFanGuy when I saw the title I clicked on it right away, since it starts with MY STORY!

I love this idea
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Old 11th May 2007, 08:13 PM
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^ AyuHamasaki01, you're so cute!

So, by this idea -- which sounds very creative, by the way -- do you mean a story like this?

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As Juliet looked out her window, she tried to Replace the thoughts of Mercutio calling her HONEY, Romeo, a Liar. She knew that no matter what weather, she'd always be walking proud on any winding road, and that she and Romeo would soon have their HAPPY ENDING.
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Old 11th May 2007, 08:57 PM
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We have to use ALL the titles? Well.. I`ll try to make sence Here I go.. erm..
This story is About You. HONEY, don`t play that GAME with me, don`t be a Liar, I wanna know if there will be HOPE or PAIN. Whille walking proud on the winding road I was singing CAROLS and remembering our moments for our HAPPY ENDING. No one can Replace you, and if my name`s WOMEN I`ll try to INSPIRE this love.

I think I missed the theme? I tried..
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Old 11th May 2007, 10:41 PM
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Very good. Glad to see some people like the idea. ^_^

As for what I meant by a story, Chibi and Diana have the right idea.

However, I actually meant ALL of her song titles, not just the ones from MY STORY.
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Old 11th May 2007, 10:45 PM
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Very good. Glad to see some people like the idea. ^_^

As for what I meant by a story, Chibi and Diana have the right idea.

However, I actually meant ALL of her song titles, not just the ones from MY STORY.
Oh. ok ^^ I`ll try more Post yours when you write
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Old 12th May 2007, 12:16 AM
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I am... gonna tell you a story! And it's gonna rock!
Yesterday, it was July 1st, and I woke up at Dayreak, and I tidied my room, and organised my collection of Dolls, but I couldn't find my Teddy Bear. I thought it might have been stolen, so I thought Who... could have taken it. Then a letter came through the letter box, so I went and got it. It was from YOU. From your letter... I found out that YOU had taken it. The letter said:
For my dear...
I have taken your smelly teddy bear because as your boyfriend I find it very very scary seeing that bloody old thing at the end of the bed every night. So this letter is just to say that we're Over cos you're crap in bed, and that I've taken your teddy bear Far away to the End of the World. I am... NEVER EVER gonna get back together with you!
Ciao
PS. This isn't About you it's about me

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PS II. Wait screw that, it is so about you.

I then yelled out: "You're just so damn immature! As if... you're ever gonna get a girlfriend as good as me! But because I love that Teddy Bear, I am so gonna go get it! I'm gonna tell the police About you!"
And then voyage to the end of the world.
It was a bit long.
And boring.
So boring I had to Replace my Kaleidoscope.
It was a Beautiful Day, and I walked down this Winding Road. That was super fun. At the end was a flower gardenand I saw my beloved teddy bear there. And then... we went home and sand some CAROLS, namely WE WISH you a merry christmas, And then... we ate Honey, cos all bears like that, don't they?
It was kinda fun going to the End of the World. I Will probably do it again.

The End, baby!

Phew, that took a while. I don't care if it makes no sense
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Old 12th May 2007, 01:06 AM
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^LOL that was heaps good/hilarious! Good job xD
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Old 12th May 2007, 03:34 AM
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That was good, tomoko!

How can I begin this Introduction to YOU, my FRIEND? Well, It was not until that Day... that Beautiful Day which was Startin' to Replace the Trauma which I was trying to avoid. And Then, I found the Key which opens the doors to the HEAVEN in which the Two of us are Connected by.

I give up.
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Old 12th May 2007, 04:56 AM
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I hope you like this.



I was wishing on a RAINBOW at Daybreak and I thought to myself. I am a (miss)understood BLUE BIRD that wants to Fly high,Free & Easy to a far away fairyland. It was a everlasting and neverending dream of mine. But everyday felted like the End of the World for me because I am still alone. As the SEASONS pass I thought it was Over for me, but today a song is born. Because of You, my Dearest Honey, YOU Replace the Trauma in my Heartplace with an ANGEL'S SONG.


more to come when I think of them.

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Old 12th May 2007, 05:14 AM
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Wow, Jeanette, that's amazing! Very well written!! ^_^

Well, it's bit awkward and doesn't really flow all that fantastically, but here's what I got. ^_^ I couldn't see using a lot of her titles in the circumstance that I wrote about, but I did my best.


It was ladie's night at the Labyrinth, not my usual night to hit the bar, but part of me really felt like being out. I walked inside and was in awe of the dance floor, the audience, ever free, was far away in a place where day-to-day problems didn't exist, the lights cascading across everyone like a kaleidoscope in some everlasing dream. I walked over to the bar and ordered my usual, casting glances to and from people.

Seeing Alex in the corner, looking bold and delicious, I went to him - the two of us have known each other for years. "Jay! You're here." He said.
"I am..." I replied, not really in the mood for conversation.
"Honey, how have you been? It was such a beautiful day today."
"It was. I've been alright. Decided to get out of the house for a bit, maybe look for that 1 love." I grinned and he nodded. Having no more words to say, as Alex was a man of few words, I said, "See ya around" and then faded back into the crowd.

Finishing my drink I savored these moments, when being young and immature was something you could get away with, stealing time like some criminal. I couldn't help wonder if this was the real me, or if I had some other secret me in my heartplace. Shrugging, I put my hands up, feeling connected to the music, being a catcher in the light.

Loosing myself among the others, I felt hands rest on my hips as someone was startin' to dance with me. It seemed as if we danced until daybreak, the two of us going everywhere, nowhere. Leaning to my ear, this would-be criminal of my heart whispered "We are beautiful fighters, born to be free and easy. I want to be close to you, to stay with you in this neverending dream - this wonderland." His words filled my head, replace(ing) all other thoughts. This was all so surreal. Is this love? No, not yet. It's still only just a game.

Walking proud and independent, with no way to say good bye, I left the Labyrinth and hoped for my happy ending some other time, some other place. Who will love me?
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Old 12th May 2007, 07:07 AM
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Uh... seeing all your stories kinda makes my story... I dunno...
It's kinda a sad story when you get thought behind it...

I'm wondering if I should add it???
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Old 12th May 2007, 09:52 AM
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here is more.



We are walking proud down this winding road. Going everywhere but nowhere. Beautiful and Greatful days are no longer far away. We were Born to be Beautiful Fighters. You make me fell Bold & Delicious.

When we started down this road I thought to myself, can I trust you? I got scared so I ran in the corner of my heart and hide the key. Am I acting immature? Is it too late? Would you go to the HEAVEN the two of us wished for without me?

Instead, With your Kaleidoscope you saw into my Heartplace, past my poker face and saw the Real me, the part of Me that I kept Secret. Then I realized that we are all Boys & Girls wishing for a HAPPY ENDING. WE are just (miss)understood teens looking for ourselves.

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well guys! these are amazing
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Old 12th May 2007, 02:12 PM
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Great XD I also wrote something.. that loses sence later on..lol have the nerves to read it.

I know it`s too late and that I`m immature. After all this, it appears that we didn`t UNITE! I am… the one who still has that SCAR on my heart! I want you to know Real me, Because of You my life seemed SURREAL. I want to turn the Key, I want to feel Connected to you again! I wanna Fly high again, get away from this Trauma called Endless sorrow. I want it to be Free & Easy, this is the End of the World to me! I don`t know if it was a Duty, I felt Naturally by your side. part of Me is still Close to you! You were always my HONEY. I always thought that I was independent, but Who… oppened my eyes to the future?
SEASONS are going by, I think I`ll NEVER EVER see you again. I`m still walking proud, but I`m not trying to Replace you! I want you to hear my ANGEL`S SONG, I want your forgiveness for WHATEVER I`ve done… There`s No way to say how I feel. Is it HOPE or PAIN? It`s not a HAPPY ENDING
I want us to meet on July 1st, to tell you my Secret. I was Born to Be… a BLUE BIRD so I can fly to you! This isn`t a fairyland without you! To me, without you, Beautiful day is a rainy day. On Ladies Night they told me to STEP you. But I couldn`t! is this LOVE? Or did you find an alterna?
Tell me please if I (miss)understood. I can`t play this GAME anymore. I feel like a criminal In The Corner of a LABYRINTH! I still wanna have my Pride. I`m finally Startin` to realize that I don`t have the Will to go to HEAVEN without you…without my Dearest, without my JEWEL… Wondering about ourselves, and about that HANABI. until that Day… I`ll remember those Greatful Days! It was that 1 LOVE that changed me, you INSPIRE me… I just hope you are not a Liar! Those CAROLS we sang together… I felt like a Beautilful Fighter.
All that Voyage…is it Over? All those Moments, we weren`t Dolls to you, right? I still feel girlish when I see that teddy bear you gave me. Can`t we start over? I`m still alone… Please, no more words until the Daybreak
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And the leaves are freshly green..... again...


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Old 12th May 2007, 02:13 PM
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Old 12th May 2007, 02:18 PM
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All your stories are so great...
Give it a try. I wanna read yours
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Old 12th May 2007, 02:19 PM
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Give it a try. I wanna read yours
you really want to??? Are you sure???
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Old 12th May 2007, 02:27 PM
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you really want to??? Are you sure???
Of course ^^ Why wouldn`t I?
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Old 12th May 2007, 02:39 PM
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Okay, here's my story! But before you read it... this first:

This story isn't something I made up! It's real! It's about one of my classmates who has it very difficult at home and that's why she smokes and cuts in herself. All of her friends don't like her anymore, except for one. Only 5 of the girls in our class (including me) think this is really sad.

Thanks for your understanding and by telling you this (what I wrote above) I hope you'll understand the last sentence:


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I can’t remember when it was. I don’t know the real faces of all the persons I saw that day. It was a rainy day and I saw you standing in the rain. When I look at you I see a scar on your arm; it’s the shape of a number sign. It’s the truth: You have no friend left. Your “friends” don’t even seem to care, do they?

I find it really difficult to write this because... I only see things through my eyes and I don’t feel things with my heart. Part of me tells me to just keep walking proud and not to look back. But that’s not who I am. I am always worried about something. This time, I’m worried about you. Saying things as: “How are you”, “Do you need a friend” and “You’re not alone” are pointless because you’ll keep staring into nothing. It’s like you have a trauma.

I find it difficult to write this... It’s because of you I’m worried.

You’re becoming independent.
You’re becoming an SOS signal.
You’re becoming immature.
You’re becoming free & easy.
You’re becoming a replace.

You have reached the end of the world.

There is no way to say this in words. Only with feelings.

Saying things like: “I really think it’s sad”, “It’s not her fault” are becoming difficult because you can’t hear them.

Are you wake up? Open your eyes and listen, Listen closely:

It’s not a game, it’s real
Your walking proud, pretend like nothing is wrong
Your becoming a liar

Please! Open your eyes, because what I am going to say know is most painful:

Which should you choose HOPE or PAIN
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