[romaji and translation] Rule

[masa]

Looking at the official lyrics, I found there had been several mistakes in my romaji translation. I corrected them, changed some parts in my English translation, and changed the line arrangement according to the official lyrics.
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doko mo kumotte ru --> toko nokotte ru
donna ni kokutte mo --> donna ni kowakutte mo
jishin wa --> kachi wa
hitsuzen nanda ne tte --> hitsuzen nanda tte
okimari na --> okimari no
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"This world isn't yet so bad, though cloudy everywhere"
--> "There remain some places not yet so bad in this world"
"However foggy, I have enough confidence in trying to trust someone"
--> "However much we may feel afraid, it's well worth trying to trust someone"